Thread: NEED YOUR CRITIQUE!

Recently i've been bored and for some reason(while looking on the internet) i decided to pickup drawing anime but i have zero experience in anime. I have ok drawing skills but RARELY draw so i looked on YouTube for inspiration and worked on a sketch using the circle and guideline methods. the outcome was decent. so today i decided to draw again using someone else's original design(but change it a little). I WANNA HEAR CRITIQUE on this picture so ill know what to improve on. btw its on line paper and done only with pencil.

Originally Posted by FlyingSangwich

Recently i've been bored and for some reason(while looking on the internet) i decided to pickup drawing anime but i have zero experience in anime. I have ok drawing skills but RARELY draw so i looked on YouTube for inspiration and worked on a sketch using the circle and guideline methods. the outcome was decent. so today i decided to draw again using someone else's original design(but change it a little). I WANNA HEAR CRITIQUE on this picture so ill know what to improve on. btw its on line paper and done only with pencil.
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I think it looks pretty good for a rough draft. Now you should move on to shading! I will post my first completed anime drawing.

Originally Posted by Christasaurus

I think it looks pretty good for a rough draft. Now you should move on to shading! I will post my first completed anime drawing.

This is my first anime drawing

Originally Posted by Christasaurus

This is my first anime drawing

Wow, that's really good! Wish I was good at painting and drawing but those two things have never liked me haha.