Recently i've been bored and for some reason(while looking on the internet) i decided to pickup drawing anime but i have zero experience in anime. I have ok drawing skills but RARELY draw so i looked on YouTube for inspiration and worked on a sketch using the circle and guideline methods. the outcome was decent. so today i decided to draw again using someone else's original design(but change it a little). I WANNA HEAR CRITIQUE on this picture so ill know what to improve on. btw its on line paper and done only with pencil.